Thursday, 21 May 2015

fox and a girl

Rumble my tummy made a volcanic noise.I was running from a fast and athletic girl  who was trying to kill me because I was borrowing some of her food as I had none.It was terrifying.I thought I was going to die.Finally she caught me and she was going to kill me but then i think she realized i had no food so she let me live.I limped back deep in the forest.I will come back one day and we could be friends.THE END.


by Nikalai Duffell


n.s.l: spelling

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