Thursday, 24 May 2018

Wings Writing

Hi this week we had to write about a small clip called Wings I had to think really hard to write about this I found it hard, anyways here it is I hope you enjoy :)



As i'm flying above the misty forest i hear an ear shattering
noise. I fly like a plane down towards it. my ears feel
uncomfortable with the atrocious sound.
Its a boy playing a flute.
Snatching him up with my wings, I force him to the ground.
That should make him stop…

I'm thrilled that the noise stopped...
Excitement fills me as I realise I am flying with one wing.
suddenly the feeling of happiness starts to disappear as I fall
to the ground. Is this going to hurt?
Thoughts start streaming through my brain.
Will anyone miss me if I die? Does it even matter?
THUMP.
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  1. Ms Dellaway3 June 2018 at 13:32

    Hi Nikalai. You have indeed worked hard to create this piece of writing. There is a definite sense of anger and annoyance you create in your first paragraph. I love that you used punctuation ... to make the reader pause and give your writing a sense of time. Tumeke!

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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